मान बैठी

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Manu jain
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मान बैठी

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गगन से चली जो जमीं की तरफ तो

इसे आख़री वो सफ़र मान बैठी


ना जाने था बूंदों को क्या मोह ऐसा

जमीं को ही अपना कबर मान बैठी


जो रहती थी आकाश में सबसे ऊपर

वो क्यूं आज खुद को अधर मान बैठी


है जीना यहीं पे है मरना यहीं पे

जमीं को ही अपना बसर मान बैठी


जमीं के लिए इक है फ़रमान जैसे

वो खुद को खुदा का खबर मान बैठी


वो अपने भी अन्दर जमीं को ही देखे

वो अपना इसे इस कदर मान बैठी


वो सुनती नहीं बस चली जा रही है

मुहब्बत का जैसे सफ़र मान बैठी


गिरी जब वो पत्तों पे मोती के जैसे

वो नादान उसको सदर मान बैठी


वो जब धूप पड़ने से ओझल हुई तो

वो चंचल सुबह को सकर मान बैठी


उसे है पता ना बचेगी मगर वो

जमीं चूमने को ज़फ़र मान बैठी


अधर:- नीचा

बसर:- गुजारा

सदर:- सर्वोच्च स्थान

सकर:- नर्क

*ज़फ़र:- जीत

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  • udit jain · 6 years ago last edited 6 years ago

    बहुत सुंदर रचना मेरी बहन ❤❤❤

  • Neha Srivastava · 6 years ago last edited 6 years ago

    अतिसुन्दर??

  • Manu jain · 6 years ago last edited 6 years ago

    Thank you Udit bhai

  • Manu jain · 6 years ago last edited 6 years ago

    Thank you neha mam

  • Vineeta Dhiman · 6 years ago last edited 6 years ago

    अतिसुन्दर

  • Manu jain · 6 years ago last edited 6 years ago

    Thank you vineeta ji

  • Sonnu Lamba · 6 years ago last edited 6 years ago

    Wahh

  • Manu jain · 6 years ago last edited 6 years ago

    Thank you mam

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