My Order Is Cancelled...

Orders placed with God got cancelled

Vridhi Chug
Vridhi Chug
05 Nov, 2020 • 1 min read min read • en
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My Order Is Cancelled...

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I placed an order with God one night...

To satisfy my wants of happiness in life...

He accepted my order the other morning...

And successfully delivered joy and happiness at the doorstep of my heart...


I placed another order with HIM, the other night...

To satisfy my wants of being at peace in life...

He accepted my order the other morning...

And successfully delivered peace and solace at the doorstep of my heart...


I again placed an order with HIM,

Now I asked for love and affection in life...

He accepted my order the other morning...

And successfully delivered love and hugs at the doorstep of my heart...


Now I placed an order with HIM again...

I asked for kindness and humbleness in life...

He denied my order the other morning...

And said there is no humbleness and kindness left on the earth...


I tried again and place an order with GOD again..

I asked to make people rid of anger and rage in life...

He denied my order the other morning...

And said there is lot of rage and grouchiness in humans left...

And finally said that " My order is cancelled"... 




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